This is really my first draft of my Letter to the Editor. I think that it may be a little too long (768 words) so maybe if you could suggest places where I could cut stuff out or if you think I don't need to, tell me that. I think it flows pretty well, but I would like to get feedback as to the content and whether or not it is interesting to read. Especially in terms of if you think I followed the assignment correctly.
As always, punctuation and other structural comments are welcomed. Any suggestions I am happy to take. I am so far proud of my work, but I definitely think it may need some revision especially since it is the first draft.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
No comments:
Post a Comment