Author's Note: Draft One

Authors Note: I am almost done with my paper I believe, besides the finishing touches. I am happy with the structure and content but if I am missing something in terms of these items I would love to know. I also would like some grammatical editing in terms of commas, semicolons and capitalization. I am looking for something to really make my paper stand out so if there are any suggestions I would be happy to hear them, or if you already think my paper is unique, let me know that as well. I need a closing paragraph as well. I feel like I have covered everything and I have nothing else to talk about.